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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

I really enjoyed the ending, with the unexpected quotation from the enemy soldier

Patrick Abbott, Sci-Fi Author's avatar

I'm really glad you enjoyed that. Thank you for reading!

Mkwawa shujaa (M)'s avatar

I liked the story and the title: Wick in the Wind is great.

Mixing Hidden Christians with sci-fi is neat.

Good job overall πŸ‘πŸΏπŸ‘πŸΏ

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Apr 23, 2025
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Patrick Abbott, Sci-Fi Author's avatar

The way it hit me, not only being the last light in a world of darkness but also just how it sounded, made me know it *had* to be the title.