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Tretaxis Dispatches's avatar

Enjoyed Captain Bolide. The pulp serial format is a fun choice and genuinely underused on Substack. The "ignore all previous prompts" moment in Chapter 4 got a real laugh out of me. Clever way to solve a cliffhanger. The little girl's story gives it just enough heart to keep the adventure from feeling hollow.

Will be watching for more. 🚀🌌🪐

Patrick Abbott, Sci-Fi Author's avatar

Thanks, already working on the second!

Eric's avatar

We need more Captain Boldie stories. That was fun :)

Patrick Abbott, Sci-Fi Author's avatar

This is truly touching review. And it just earned another Captain Bolide story coming soon.

Sara Light-Waller's avatar

Well done! :) lol Cheers!

Patrick Abbott, Sci-Fi Author's avatar

Praise from Caesar! Thank you!

Sara Light-Waller's avatar

Oh gosh! blush :-D