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The Rai-ght Guy's avatar

In such a brief story you did a great job of creating atmosphere and an engaging plot. Great stuff!

Patrick Abbott's avatar

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! That means a lot to me.

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

I could feel this one. Made me think of the album Life in the Wires by Frost.

Patrick Abbott's avatar

Such a short story that alludes to things deeper than the ocean.

Kyra Leigh's avatar

This made me think of Candle Cove

Patrick Abbott's avatar

Thank you so much. I do appreciate being compared to something that popular. Thank you again!

Kyra Leigh's avatar

You’re welcome :)