Very Short Stories Collection #4
Short Tales for Amusement
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Some of My Favorite Very Short Stories
The vss365 and scififri writing challenges, which I post on Substack Notes, are fun little activities that allow me to sprout small tales in unique ways. Below are some of my recent favorites with short explanations. Be sure to check out the other Very Short Stories posts for more: One, Two, and Three.
The Last Saga
A vss365 sci-fi story built around the word elegy
"Come see how a Norman dies!" John declared, jumping into the Federation's trench. It was an elegy for his last stand, an ode to his long forgotten ancestors, and a poem for an action that bought time for his friends. 2,000 years had passed since Hastings, but his blows were as mighty in the age of plasma throwers as they would have been in the days of swords.
The Hardest Moment in the Space Corps
A vss365 science fiction story based on the word scar
His hand ran across the ship's once pristine silver hull. Each nick and ding had a match on his scarred and pitted skin. For 42 cycles it had kept him alive on runs and in battles. Now it was time to say good bye and hang up his flight suit. He didn't want it to end.
The Beast Within
A vss365 tale based on the word toxic
I walked in and saw him. Well-shaped body with a natural amount of muscle that showed strength without spending too much time in the gym. Stubble throughout his face gave the impression of high testosterone that mocked daily shaving habits. Meanwhile, his haircut was a dead giveaway for a civilian who couldn't fully let go of his military days. Goodness, he screamed her type. Poor dastard, he probably thought talking his way in here would actually help find the little girl.
No, I thought, I won't let him suffer, not like others, not like me.
Putting on a dumb smirk, I stumbled as I waltzed up to the bar. I knew her eyes would be on me. Heck, I could feel the hate. But I couldn't look. No, that would stop me. I could never face her like that.
My large glass mug was there like usual. I didn't even acknowledge the club's bartender as I poured myself a sloppy, foaming drink. Then, with a large swing of my arm, I allowed the glass to hit the guy straight in the jaw. The flying beer splashing on his stung face added insult to injury.
"Hey," I slurred, "who the hell are you? This is a private club! You made me spill my drink, you jerk!"
That was all that was needed. Hannah's heavy grip had me by the shoulder. I could feel her nails against my skin. Gawd, she must have wanted to puncture straight into my muscles with those hidden claws. Thank goodness her new favorite was right there.
She pulled me to the corner and spun me so I faced her.
"Are you already drunk?!" Her words were ice cold whispers that masked her heart's hot hatred of me. "What the hell is the matter with you?! Gabriel is my guest! Why can't you ever let me be happy?!"
In my head, I thought about keeping the drunk front up, but now, I lost all energy to mess with her. The only thing left was to do what was right.
"If you cared about him, you would apologize and send him home, never to see him again. But you don't," I let the sting of those words sit for a moment. "You're toxic- and you made all of us toxic. You make us like you, and then you hate us for it. You think he's going to be any different. In time you get rid of him like you did the rest, like you’ll do with me."
Her teeth flash at me before she just barely collects herself. "Gabriel is different!"
Gabriel. I hope he gave her a fake name. Do detectives do that?
As I pondered the poor guy’s name, he called out, "Hey, Hannah, I think I'm going to call it a night. Thanks- though. Have a good night."
Her hands reached out as if she could cover the distance and stop him. "Gabriel, please stay. It was just a misunderstanding." She forced a laugh. "Perhaps you would want to go on the deck and see the stars? I can show you what I wished on as a girl."
He didn't reply. Instead, he waved and walked out.
I grabbed Hannah's arm. "Please, for his soul, let him go."
With a firm yank, she set herself free and followed him. For the first time since- I forgot how long, I prayed. Not for me, but for him.
The Destiny of Space Rogues
A vss365 science fiction tale using the word speaker.
Dash Danzig had rescued a space princess, married her, and inherited the throne. But his dream became a nightmare because Armstrong II was a constitutional monarchy. He missed adventure whenever he had to listen to his parliament's speaker.
Baited Conversation
A scififri story built around the word basic
10 BALTAR INPUT compliment about new appearance
15 BALTAR INPUT no compliment
20 S.A.R.A. OUTPUT reward #2,435
25 S.A.R.A. OUTPUT punishment #1
L1 If 10 then 20, If 15 then 25
Baltar mouth dropped as he gazed upon the screen.
"Sara," he called, "what's this?"
The avatar for S.A.R.A. appeared, this time sporting a new haircut appearance.
"Hello, Captain Baltar," S.A.R.A. said. "I was working on some basic coding. Oh, do you like what I did with my hair?"
Her happy approach showing off of the hair was the scariest thing Baltar had ever seen, and he once was a prisoner on Rurapente.
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Special Section: Substackers of Note
J.A. Evans writes horror and science fiction.
SyntheticLife is uploading chapters from his cyberpunk space opera.
Steven Cary is posting a new chapter of first first novel, NextGen, each week. It’s about a group of teenage friends who start a band in the year 2050, a generation after universal automation collapses American society into a high-tech authoritarian dystopia.
Barloc Bedlam is starting a Substack about trying to improve STEM education through the formation of a nonprofit.
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Until Next Time
Next time we are putting things in high gear. Next time I will share my short story Captain Bolide!, which is a fun little series of pulp flash fictions.
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